Friday, January 11, 2013

The Unfortunate: Introduction

If you could do anything or wish anything, What would it be?

It was a cold dark November night. A young teenage boy with dark charcoal colored black hair. Was wandering the streets. He looked rather filthy. With ripped black faded jeans, and a stained white t shirt which appeared to be to small for him.

"I`m so co co cold" He mumbled as he walked towards a old beat up bench with bold graffiti painted on it.

"This should do for now" He said. This young man was Jon Ming. A 16 year old teenager. Who had been homeless for 2 years. His father was the cause in all his family troubles. Jon Ming was always abused by his mother, and his father when was around at least  Irene Ming was Jon`s abusive mother. Irene wasn`t always abusive but..........


~Yes a dramatic cliff hanger for the Introduction! I hope you liked what you read so far. New chapter 1 coming soon!

Please give me some feed back!

~Dontaye

Introduction from me.

So while I am on home bound  I`ve decided i wanted to do something productive with my time. So I picked my notebook, Sat down, and began to unleash my imagination on a piece of paper. I decided I wanted to write a good story. So I started writing down names for potential characters in this story. I came up with the name of "Jon Ming". Yes a rather interesting name if I say so myself. Jon ming is the main character in my story. I am a 16 year old male from Indiana. While I am new to creating stories. I hope to build a good fan base with all of you on this site. My hobbies are playing football,watching tv,and helping my fellow community out.  I think i had introduced myself well. Now I will end this blog post. I will however post the introduction to my story after i finish posting, and editing this post.

Stay Tuned For my Story! 

~Dontaye